Rydia

Looking at how this poem has improved I'd like to say well done! This is much better than the first draft and some of your imagery is wonderful but I ...

I have to agree that the first stanza has a very choppy rhythm and I had to re-read several times. The idea behind this is interesting but your imagery and ...

I don't change my reading habits when I'm writing. I still read plenty but I have to cut down on computer time and such.

Very nice. The expression and hair are amazing.

I like the energy balls and the characters eyes are very freaky!

Oh, sorry! I'll edit the post...

Litvia "A bit of both," I admitted. "I don't understand. What are you trying to hide?" Lacy demanded. "Myself," I sighed. "That's a real great answer," Jess snorted. "Me think ...

"There's someone else with them?" Heather asks. "Yeah, hopefully not one of those creatures," Adam replies. "It must be my brother. Claire says he's looking for me," Heather realises happily. ...

River I hadn't been upstairs long when shouts broke out below me. Sighing, I grabbed my daggers and headed down. "What's going on?" I asked. "We be catching us a ...

Name= Emma Cole Nickname= Ember Age= 23 Crime= She's an arsonist and has committed a long list of offences but the one that put her in jail was a year ...

Tigra 'What a strange group of girls,' I found myself thinking as I tailed them. Why was the virus so random with who it didn't effect? "No, that is a ...

River "Okay, I wont press you. It would go against the thieves code anyway," I smiled again and decided to leave it at that. Besides, I was tired. After three ...

At first, I wasn't sure about this one but then I re-read it and I like it. Your imagery is pleasant and your message is strong. Things are better appreciated ...

Adam, Bella and Heather wander down the corridoor, calling Alice's name. Amidst the shouts and the thud thud of their steps, Heather's phone begins to ring. "How do you get ...

I've never seen marks in library books actually but then the local library and school library check the books when you return them so I suppose that discourages such people. ...