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Tigra I smirked inwardly. I had the chance to get my own back for her comment on my own race but then... Something about her nervous, determined expression stopped me ...

I thought these were okay but I'd like to see a more vivd passage of time. Maybe you should set each one in a different season and add the fourth. ...

Ciao Felicity and yes, everyone loves an Italian girl =) Actually, I visited there pretty recently on a skiing holiday and it was awesome! Well see you around the site, ...

Ember How ironic. A nuclear bomb hits and the only survivors are high security prisoners. Must have been a pretty awesome bomb. It even melted half my cell and that ...

Thanks for the comments and yes, it is childish, but there's a reason for that - I wrote it three years ago. I was just sifting through my old English ...

“Tag, you’re it.” And the game begins. I whisper it to myself, though no one is around to hear. In my pocket, I hold the king in my hand, the ...

It's rather cute but I'd like to see full colour!

Welcome fbigoats! You might want to check out the writing tips section, they address a few solutions to writer's block there... Good luck and happy writing, Heather xx

Red ropes rising, A light in the sky. Indigo river cruising, No one knows why. Blue river flowing, Orange fire glowing, Which way is it going? Only the RAINBOW knows.

My Life's Blood rushes past as the knife of this world cuts deeper, [No need for a comma here.] and deeper, into my soul. My heavy soul which was once ...

I love disney! And completely with you on pirates. Jack is such a loveable rogue. Anyway, welcome to YWS nd I'm sure you'll fit right in. If you need a ...

I have started to develop a distaste for poems written in this style but somehow I like yours despite the tight constraints and repetition. Your rhythm and rhyme are superb, ...

But I love to read my past work! Diaries, stories, poems. I ransacked my room a year or two back and gathered everything into an anthology and I love o ...

The death of a child is long forgotten, When their death is planned years ahead. Taken form the world, As prisoners of pain and suffering. Who can say they deserve ...

I absolutely adore the Degeneration X stanza now. Admittedly it's still nt perfect but no piece of poetry ever is or a least not so that everyone in the world ...