Rydia

Hi there, it's nice to meet you. I'd love to work in journalism and if you have the right mind, I'm sure you'll go far. I'd never be able to ...

I don't think anyone gets to this age without a few sorrows and it was interesting to find out that you and Bella know each other in 'real life.'

No problem, I'm glad to be able to help.

Hi there, it's nice to meet you and welcome to YWS! As for the poem, a few suggestions... Ghostly fingers flip the pages, [No need for a comma here] Of ...

It's not very original but if you look beyond that, you have a good idea and a nice collection of words.

Very imaginative and well written. Your choice of language and the use of brackets are both original and refreshing. Well done with this one Whence and I do hope you'll ...

Tigra "I suppose I'll help," Hidena decided. "Well I don't exactly have anything else to do," Serin sighed. "Thanks. I appreciate the help." "So you want the cure because..." Val ...

Falcon "I hear ye be looking fer work?" A gruff, masculine voice siddled up beside me. "And where did you hear that?" I asked, purposefully taking a sip of my ...

There once was a young eight-year old boy named josh [A rather 'once upon a time' sort of beginning. Maybe try something a bit more imaginative.] and his mum had ...

Looks interesting. Name= Unknown but she calls herself Falcon. Age= She appears to be a little under 18 but is actually 79. Race= Dark Elf. Eyes= Violet. Hair= Indigo but ...

First off, it's very short but for the moment I shall look past that... The red rocky ground. The stars that seemed to go on for eternity. The sandy taste. ...

The girl is very beautiful and the guys costume superb. Love the expressions in this one! Also the colouring works well, especially the touch of blue for the guy's eyes ...

It's a very close replica of Belle until you get to the face. The eyebrows droop too much and her expression is rather disturbing. Also the neck looks wrong because ...

Just a quick comment. Seenas this is based on us, my brother's name is Mark and he's fifteen years old, will be sixteen next month. "Should we ring Claire?" Mark ...

Oh yeah, tell me about it. There are plenty of things I should have done different but didn't. I tried doing this once actually but I looked back on it ...