Rydia

Not my type of poem but I'm attempting to read a variety... The imagery is nice and it reminds me of some of Donne's work. You might want to check ...

It was very good for an early poem. Like the others said, add in a little more detail and description and this could be even better.

They both write excellent poetry. Hitcher is amazing but I'm rather fond of the laboratory too.Hmmm. Then there's stealing... Sorry, I can't decide.

I like this one, just wishing I could see the whole sword though. It looks interesting.

This one's rather cool but his face is rather hard to make out with his hair like that and the hat doesn't look so great.

The chest is a bit skinny but other than that it's a nice sketch. The trousers are well detailed and I like the face.

Lose the red text, fix your grammar, set it out like a set of lyrics and then you're half way there. Also, you need verses and a chorus.

I agree that it's rather simple and not the most original but as far as love songs go, it's nice. Work on the rhythm a little perhaps but in general ...

Amethyst "You sure you're the one they call Blade?" The man demanded for the second time. I gritted my teeth. "No third chances with me my friend, no matter who ...

Sounds like a good idea. Maybe they all try to head out of town but the roads have been blocked by the government to prevent the outbreak spreading? That way ...

A few bits and pieces I found - Britain’s worst race riots for years erupted in the northern town of Oldham in Lancashire over the weekend of the 25th May ...

Poetic prose is basically a piece of writing that is in the form of prose (a story) but uses poetic language.

A few specific points first - Christian raised his eyebrows [s]up[/s] at me and studied his watch. “You’re late.” [You don't need the up because you can't exactly raise your ...

I second the ones by Phillip pullman and George Orwell. Excellent books! Also, I've only read one by Lois Lowry but it was very enjoyable. As for my own suggestions... ...

Name= Amethyst. Nickname= Amy. Race= Half Pixie, half Fairy. Age= 17. Hair= Waist length and lilac. Eyes= Rosy pink. Figure= Small and slight. Other= Has purple wings. Abilities= She can ...