Rydia

I can see that a lot can be read from these two lines but I would prefer a longer poem. Having said that, I do think you choice your words ...

I do wish it was a little longer but I like your abrupt tone and the surprise ending. I was expecting an alternative ending but not like that! Well written ...

Oooh. I'm intrigued. I shall have to get my hands on some of her work now...

I hate the rain. It always makes me sad but then I associate it with bad memories so I suppose it depends on your own experiences. I certainly use it ...

Lilly "What would you like?" I approached the corner table where three men had just taken their seats. Two were regulars but the third was unfamiliar to me. He was ...

I love the fourth, it looks so mystical, the way the water reflects the sun and the trees lining the sides. Brilliant! The third is a little plain but the ...

When Adam and Bella return to the Highwind, they are confronted by Sciptio. "Why aren't we searching for Alice?" Scipio demands. "Because we have other problems. If they realise their ...

Name= Lilliana Nichname= Lilly Age= 18 Occupation= Waitress at the tavern. Race= Pixie. Abilities= Very fast, good with weapons, can cast minor spells and has some ability in healing. Hair= ...

A few specific points first... the one with the merry-go-round that the bigger kids would push their little siblings on. [I think this would sound better as 'the one with ...

The dust , swirling up from the road , reached for the man's face and eyes like a slow-moving, groping hand. and his mouth and eyes were full of the ...

Don't worry, just keep going and I'm sure everything will turn out fine. Claire and me had a few problems with our story because we wanted it to be based ...

Sorry, I don't know then. I've only ever found the range with a group of statistics.

Happy Birthday Jack! I don't exactly know you but neither do I fancy being eaten... so hope you had a great time and lots of cake! Oh and happy half ...

I never use line so not sure where that comes from and we use both post and mail. I do anyway.

Welcome to the site Lucy. There was terrible weather in Selby (Yorkshire) last night. The storm cut off my power and I couldn't go on the computer =( Anyway, I'm ...