Rydia

Ember I could ignore the guns no longer and, as I approached the sound of shots, I realised that many others had already gathered to the scene. I hung back, ...

Sounds fine to me. Name= Tabitha Age= 16 Powers= Can fly and has super strength Hair= Chestnut brown Eyes= Sharp and deep green Personality= Sweet and caring. Never tires of ...

I liked this but you relied quite heavily on select colours rather than vivid description. Perhaps you should concentrate more on the men who will be fighting in this war ...

Really? How strange. Must go look in dictionary...

Sure. So I write a profile and someone else adopts my character. Sounds interesting. What's the theme of the story then?

Here's how to tidy it up first... D ivorce sucks, yes it does. Parents seperating, so you are constantly on the move, I wish there was something I could do ...

I think that's the English medieval spelling. I've certainly not seen it with an a.

I'm not so sure about the guy's hair but I like the shading on these two and the guy's outfit is very cool.

I like what you've done so far and I'd love to see the finished version!

That's okay. Tigra "Well you guessed my species correctly and Tigers have a rather acute sense of smell," I replied. "I've never seen a shapeshifter transform," Hidena murmered to herself. ...

Amethyst I was led into a dark, foreboding castle that reminded me of a legend I had once heard about a group of people who watched over a monster in ...

Lilly "My apologies for the time that has elapsed since you arrived. Do you care for drinks? Food?" I asked politely. That was one ule here. Guests in the back ...

You mean like create a character opposite to your own personality? That's always fun.

Falcon I finished my meal and washed it down with a few beers. "You found any work yet?" Bill asked casually. I shook my head slowly. "Not the right sort," ...

Earlier today, I chose a seat near the front of the bus and placed my bag beside me. Then I remembered that it was Thursday and there was no need ...