Rydia

I have to agree that the rhyming is a little off in places but this is a rather funny little poem. I certainly wasn't expecting it to be about cannibalism ...

Tanis "You're crazy my friend," Tanis sighed, "But it's good to see you again." "What there is to see," Tas grinned and then Caramon and Flint joined them at the ...

A choice between Tanis and Laurana I think... Any chance I can have both? If not, I suppose I shall take Tanis...

"We have to do something to help them," Heather sighs to Scipio as they search for weapons. "I know but what? I can only disintegrate things remember and I'm not ...

Lilly We had been traveling for about an hour when I started to feel a little sore. It had been a long time since I'd rode on a horse, especially ...

Litvia "And you hunt those creatures? Wow, what a life," Jess murmured. "Sure, if you don't mind hiding all the time," I sighed and then forced another smile. "Sorry. I'm ...

normalcy - Yes it is a word but I don't think it's the best choice. Perhaps normality? I think that one would work better. That said, this piece is well ...

Oooh yera sounds interesting. Who do you want writer?

You should. I've read four of them now and have a fifth waiting...

Well I suppose writer can't have her own so I get Trinity?

I love this poem. Your girlfriend is very lucky, this is incredibly sweet and well written. you've used the rhyme effectively and it's easy to relate to because it features ...

I'm not so sure that I agree with removing all the adjectives from this piece but it wouldn't hurt to take out a few. Your imagery is beautiful in places ...

Katalyn "I think it's about time we left town," Kat decided, removing the hand brake and heading down the road. "Finally. We have to warn the citizens in the next ...

This looks interesting. I shall create an Arcanite. Name= Alicia Age= 17 Race= Arcanite Hair= Long, golden blonde. Eyes= Forget-me-not blue. Figure= Tall and frail. Very slight and no muscles. ...

Heather stumbled back a step, beginning to wonder what sort of creatures she had got involved with but Scipio stood firm. "You'll pay for that," Scipio insists, "I'm going to ...