Rydia

Who's Sturm? You haven't done a bio for him yet and I doubt I can post without knowing more...

I just wanted to make a few specific points before I get on to the general critique... It was called The Death Parlor, and what a fine establishment it was! ...

You have a brilliant sense of humour Snoink and, I think, a deep hatred of physics. If they combine to give this sort of poetry then you should be forced ...

I'm not sure about the right hand (or lack of rather) or the stephoscope but the rest is really good. Your shading is brilliant, love the first and the colours ...

Yeah, it's a brilliant movie and I'm hoping they go back and do the Magician's Nephew sometime soon...

No five stars doesn't require too many reviews. See, I already have five yellow stars =) Hmm. I guess I did things the wrong way around. Too many reviews, not ...

River "While your methods prove effective, I'm not sure that was the best way to handle the situation," I stated as Liskano headed for the door. "You can't just go ...

I think I wrote this two years back and I might do a re-write so I'd appreciate any critiques... What I Love. I have a love of all things green, ...

Okay then but this is just a suggestion... Lunch Time He liked to eat the ones he loved; He liked to suffocate them. If only for a little while, he ...

"A hint that you could have got just as easily," Tas laughed as he grabbed his ale and thre himself back into his seat. "So what do you think now?" ...

Lilly I had only fought in tavern brawls until this moment but I was pleased to find that I was no more afraid then then. I drew two small knives ...

"Is this a bad time to ask if one of you has a stun gun?" Heather asks as Jay disappears and Mattster collapses to the floor. "Very bad time, Rick ...

I love these books but I've never heard of a code in fairy language.

That's a real pretty name Lilith, I've used it for my characters before now... Last one was an evil demon... Hehe. Anyway, I can see that you're nothing like that ...

Your rhyme and repetition are pretty much accurate so well done there and I like the reference to Da Vinci, it fits in nicely. I like this poem because it ...