Rydia

The puppy is cute and well drawn though the shading could be better. Also, I love the shoe but it looks rather flat. Try and set yourself a challenge next ...

I think I prefered your other fairies. This one seems quite out of proportion. The chest is too long and the straps are at odd angles. Also, do the hair ...

Okay. So we starting a new thread or writing here?

Kevin I downed another drink and then headed over to Riley. "You going to introduce us to your 'friends?'" I asked casually. Riley looked startled for a moment and then ...

Tigra "Come on, let's keep going," I pleaded. "What's wrong?" Val asked, a touch of concern in her voice. "I don't like the smell of death," I replied, "Even the ...

*Is he seriously dead?* Lilly "This doesn't feel right," I sighed, a strange tingle running up my arm. "I know. What was he thinking?" Ariana demanded. "No. I mean... I ...

I think my titles tend to make sense after the first few chapters and sometimes straight away. A few I've used for stories are - Suns, Planets and a whole ...

The wings are beautiful but maybe add some silvery tears and fill in the face? Then you'd be able to tell she is crying. Also, the top half of the ...

"The repairs are finished," Alice announced in a loud, authorative voice that carried around the ship across the loud speaker. "Brilliant," Scipio murmurs. "Yeah. We can go find Adam now," ...

Kevin I sat between Roxy and Olivia as I drank my bear but every now and then I glanced across at Riley. I had never seen the girl she was ...

Tigra We passed many bodies as we wandered through the town and most lay discarded in the streets as if the disease had hit fast and there had been no ...

Litvia "Sure. Goodbye then," I replied, standing up. "You say that as if it's final," Lacy noted. "It probably is," I sighed, surprised to feel a touch of regret. "Oh. ...

I don't think the rating is required and here's the specific points - around his ankles before leaking it's way slowly until it was in a smoky puddle directly in ...

"Raistlin," Sturm greeted, his voice barely civil as he addressed the mage but then the slight frown melted into what was almost a smile as he turned back to the ...

Lilly I crept slowly towards the large, pine door and gently eased it open. Peering inside, I saw Arias squirming on the floor, a cloaked finger standing over him, his ...