Rydia

River Alone on the roof, I sighed and stared out into the distance. The army moved closer until I could leave it no longer. I stood on the edge of ...

I love the characters though description will be hard if I choose to enter the competition. Their eye colour is a little hard to distinguish or at least it is ...

My character's full name shall be Yera Knight "Hey, 28-Knight," Casey greeted me. "Hi there 36-Stevenson," I replied. "I love your hair," Casey gushed, "But why blue? I think pink ...

12:30 am Katalyn "What are we going to do?" Mike asked. "We could try and speak with the people up there," I suggested doubtfully and then more shots rang through ...

River "Yeah, I noticed that," I sighed, seating myself behind him, legs dangling over the side of the roof. "Kasko?" "Yes," He responded. "You say I'm half fighting Elf so ...

"So what's the plan for arriving at Atlantis?" Heather asks Rick. "We break Adam out," He replies simply. "That's it?" Scipio asks. "Yeah. We tend to act on impulse," Bella ...

Kevin "Awww, that's so sweet," Olivia smiled that pretty, rosebud smile of hers and a scowl flickered across Roxy's face when Max smiled back. "You want showing around tomorrow?" I ...

Lilly "So that's it? We leave him?" Kate asked. "Yes. The mission is too important," Ariana decided, vaulting into her saddle. Reluctantly we all climbed upon our horses and began ...

Sounds like a strange combination but sure, I'll give it a go at some point.

They're prtty cool. I love the wizard. Maybe do a coloured version too though. I could see him in deep blue robes with electric blue lines coming from that staff. ...

I'm not a big fan of music, in fact I hardly ever listen to it and I certainly don't have any on when I'm writing. Strange I know but my ...

Kevin "The guy spilled his beer and thought he'd try and blame it on..." I hesitated, realising I had yet to ask his name. "Max," The boy filled in. "Well ...

Bent, I understood your poem just fine and, as mentioned before, I found it humourous but I agree that it's a little 'wordy.' I wasn't familiar with the term before ...

The rhythm needs a bit of work, as does the rhyme but the content isn't bad. Fairly simplistic but quite nice. Here are some more specific suggestions, use or don't ...

I like the first one a lot and the last is quite a nice collage but the others are rather simplistic. They're not bad though and using a computer doesn't ...