Rydia

Okay, I suppose I can try that. Back to work... *Edit* Any more suggestions on how to improve it?

Thanks for the tips. Lol. I'm sorry it's so bad, I'm just not used to writing serious stories seenas my last two have both been comedies and, to be honest, ...

This isn't quite finished and, as the competition closes tomorrow, I doubt it will be done in time for me to enter but for two days work I think it's ...

No problem. Your character is Alexynia right? Well basically, they started their journey and were attacked by a group of guards. There were too many to fight so Arias teleported ...

Yera Later that day, I was witness to a second strange event. I was walking through the vacant hallway, slightly late for my next lesson, when I saw Martin and ...

I've never used one, I actually like to write it twice. That way I can check for spelling mistakes and such in the first version as well as improve on ...

I don't think this poem is too bad. I know nothing of the context as I have yet to read the book but I'm intrigued so you must have done ...

A few specific suggestions first and don't feel you have to use them... The sun rose slowly and the light woke Maura from the little rest that she gets. Soon ...

I love the fireballs in eight but five, nine and ten are really cool. The original is nice too but the others have really cool effects =)

These are really well drawn, especially the girl but your writing is a little hard to read and colour would be brilliant.

"What the hell was that?!" Heather exclaims, peering through the window at the huge explosion. "I think someone just blew up Atlantis," Scipio sighed. "But why?" Heather wonders, "These people ...

Hmmm. How to incorporate a friendless, unsociable character? You do like to challenge us Alice... Kevin My eyes followed Ben right to the door and only then was I satisfied. ...

Well who doesn't? TPBM is the best writer in the world.

Villains never win. Night. Dark and moonless. Perfect. Time to go. I creep along and scale the building. Good, no one heard. Of course that’s so, I’m the best. At ...

I get to vote next election so look out Brown, you're going down! Lol. No, seriously, he should be okay and I'll see how he does before I decide where ...