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Yera "Well it's not really something I can show," Tabbitha explained. "It's more that I've suddenly got better at sports and... I almost crushed Michaels hand when I shook it ...

I love the layout of your website and the art is really good, especially some of the sketches and lineart. The dolls are pretty cute too. Keep up the good ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS. I'm sure you'll meet lots of friends here =)

Tigra "Let's just go. If it comes to defending ourselves, we'll do what we can and at least we'll have tried," I sighed, once more picking up the trail. "But ...

I have to admit that this really doesn't make that much sense to me but so long as you understand it...

"No I don't," Alice replies stubbornly and hesitates as she puts the pillow back. Scipio does not move from the bed and neither does another word pass his lips. For ...

Dia de los Muertos? Doesn't that translate as day of the dead or is my spanish just really poor?

My usual specific points first - As she plopped herself down at the kitchen bar, her mother sat [Pretty sure you meant set. the pancakes, all ready buttered with syrup ...

No problem WC, I'm glad Im could help =) Lilly "Let's just say I got lucky," Tera replied, evading the question. "How? Arianna pressed. "Look," I interrupted, "That's not important. ...

Wow, that's a lot of projects but they all sound interesting and you're right, there's nothing wrong with multiple projects. I'd die if I could only work on one novel ...

This poem is rather deep but, at times, your punctuation (or lack of) makes it hard to read and disrupts the flow. Also, the second stanza should start with 'I ...

Yay, good old YWS =)

The first one is perfect. It's just simply breath taking. Not so sure about the second though the concept of 'framing' the orb is very interesting. Keep up the good ...

No. The fourth of July is an American only holiday because it's to celebrate their liberation from the British Government. In fact, I didn't even know it existed until about ...

Wow Jasmine. i learn something new about you every day. How can you not like Eoin Colfer and Northern Lights? I've written stories with a girl who didn't like Northern ...