Rydia

I think you could tidy this up with a bit more imagery, some nice description of the 'area' or the candle perhaps and then take a look at the flow. ...

I'm not fond of reality shows but TV? I love it! I couldn't live without some of my favourite programs and I don't think it's damaged my imagination.

I love the second version and it fits the quote even better. The eyes are really freaky and the whole image is just brilliant!

I think the chorus has quite a nice rhythm to it. The words themselves need a little work and the verses could be better but I like it. What sort ...

I love the variety of fishes in the first and the others are right, the colours are perfect. I like the shubumkins best. And no I can never spell that ...

"Okay then. We'll go get something to eat," Scipio decides. "We?" Alice asks but she doesn't argue the point. Together, they make their way down to the kitchen and as ...

Kevin I arrived home, let myself in, threw my bag under the stairs and retreated into my room. I don't like to be alone in the house but, at this ...

Lilly "It's worth a try," The voice that I had come to think of as the real Arias replied. That was all I needed to hear. I allowed myself to ...

Tigra "I know you feel bad about this Hidena and I understand why but there are people depending on us. Every minute wasted is people's lives," I sighed. "But you ...

I think that the beginning, Brad's discovery, is a touch long and repetitive. Maybe delete some of his thoughts. Other than that though, you have good characterisation and I like ...

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Hi kitty, nice to meet you, I'm kitty. Lol. I don't mind sharing the name so have whatever nickname you like ;) Welcome to YWS and feel free to pm ...

Hehehe. Yeah, childish comes to mind but that's not necessarily bad. I think this would make a good children's poem if you tidy up the flow and perhaps take another ...

This poem was cute. That's not necessarily a good thing but I think it is here. The rhyme is really simplistic and a few sounded forced like 'teal' but you'll ...

Hehe. You mean like Tori didn't realise she was a villain? Seriously though, I miss her too and Amelia. Perhaps one day we will write a sequel for that one ...