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Re: Rise of the Blood Dogs
Alicia *Edited* It was supposed to be an easy mission and so I was sent along to get a little training. I was at the back of a small group ...
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Re: Chat room adventures
Heather heard the screams and enters the room just as Nutty dives towards Rick's limp form. A strange orb turns and swoops down towards her but Adam grabs a bedside ...
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Re: Wars of the races
Lilly "Okay so we can just about trust this other 'self' but why are we allowing that vampire to listen to our conversations? Is no one else just a little ...
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Re: Typical Teenagers
Kevin After about an hour of listening to my music, I turned it off and crossed the room to my computer. I flicked through a few sites, checked my mail ...
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Re: Pieces of a puzzle
This is quite cute but the anology isn't perfect because pieces tend to be connected to more than one other piece. It's well written though and it's sweet. Maybe elaborate ...
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Re: The Outlaws
River "Where are those mangy hellhounds that Alex said would help?" Caden muttered, not far to my right. "Yeah, what's taking them so long?" Grey responded. "Ask them yourself," Alex ...
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Re: The Doomed
Ember "For a start, we're gonna burn this body," I declared, pulling out various pieces of cloth, a small vial of alcohol and my lighter. "You want me to work ...
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Re: The Elephant's Legacy
Sure I can critique this one. Let me see... In general, this was well written and very interesting but I'd have loved a description of 'the elephant man.' What exactly ...
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Re: Wars of the races
Lilly "Now!" I repeated, taking hold of the joint magic and, with the help of Alexynia, I lifted us to safety just in time to watch the explosion. "Arias!" Ariana ...
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Re: Rise of the Blood Dogs
I'm not sure. Do you think Hunter would mind if we started now or are we better waiting for him to start?
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: The Doomed
Come on, lets keep this one going! Ember I gave Jason a sardonic smile and then turned towards the bleeding man as he began to talk again. "I first saw ...
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Re: Piracy Upon the Sea
Amelia The boy indicated a direction somewhere North and the three other pirates headed off looking pleased with themselves. "Only pirate ships and traders harbor up there," I noted and ...
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Re: The Oil Mark [UPDATED]
Hi there magicman, love the story so far. Just a few specific points first - In the corner of one of the smaller drawers, a small piece of hardened bread ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: Icy Paths - Prologue
Yeah, I like the second version better and it's very well written. I'm intrigued I must say. You mention that it is a prologue and yet the main character, at ...
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Re: Which printing format do you prefer?
Yeah, I think paperbacks are the best and most of my collection are in that format.
Jul 8, 2007
