Rydia

Falcon I inspected the new girl with a mild curiosity before nodding my greeting. "Another... person... is always... helpful," The young woman hesitated as she took in my appearance. "If ...

English muffins love. Not normal muffins. Lol.

I shall probably get round to checking out the story sometime today. I certainly enjoyed this little introduction...

I liked one, three and four best. The central angel of the first is good, the stormy sky of the third is brilliant and four has been cropped well to ...

This was very sweet and it evoked many memories and thoughts. I'm afraid that I've strayed from the path a few times too many though. Lol. Don't ask. The piece ...

I don't think it should be capitalised based on the fact that you wouldn't if you was refering to your character as the girl before you gave her a name. ...

I thought that this was well written and I liked the irregular rhyme in the middle - When I look into those fiery eyes I know you slowly realise but ...

Hi Jasmine, another for me to critique? Don't mind if I do ;) Your second line is a syllable out of the sonnet format but that shouldn't be too hard ...

This was a really interesting piece and I have a high respect for anyone who can put themselves through being bitten and chewed to help such a magnificant creature. Did ...

No, not too much but I shall go through and make grammar and sentence structure suggestions - The Turner family lived on top of Cravesville Hill in the small town ...

I like this piece and it is a touch abstract but you give enough information that I could understand what was going on so well done. I do have a ...

That's not a bad idea except that it's other people's portfolios that I want to get my hands on. Now if everyone put all their work in their signatures... Lol.

Lol. What will people think of next?

They're sort of up and down. Every now and then they'll be fine but then they're gone again =(

Lol. Yeah, I kind of noticed that but it's interesting to hear from people who were on TYWC when it was more alive. Not that it's dead now. It will ...