Rydia

I like this piece, it's interesting and quite descriptive. You should certainly add some more. Other than correcting the mistake that flytodreams pointed out, I have only one suggestion - ...

Skye I stayed rather quiet through the discussions and eyed my new travelling companions. They were strange, diverse, different. They seemed so willing to put their lives on hold because ...

I'm not really fond of Haikus because it's very difficult to say everything you want in so few words but this wasn't bad for an early attempt. Work on using ...

I think it's advancing very well =) Kevin "Just trust me. They'll be find okay," Max assured me but that didn't make me feel any better and I knew there ...

Oh don't worry, I don't think the alliance will hold all the way through. There have already been a few disagreements and I'm sure there's many more to come. My ...

Lol. I didn't see that coming!

Alicia "I think that's a good idea," The stranger agreed and I nodded my approval but then turned away again when my eye caught a flicker of movement. The Graelk ...

This is a really sweet little poem. The rhyme and rhythm were simple but effective and basically, I found it quite enjoyable.

Lilly "He is the master. That's all there is to it," A.k.5 shrugged but then Arias took over. "I've heard tales," He began, "I've heard that he is one of ...

Lol. The imagery was brilliant and I love how you uphold the serious tone until that final line. Brilliant. I must say that some lines were a little confusing but ...

Sorry Whence but I don't really do music...

1 - Love the head and the hands holding the mini universes. Very feminine though and not easily thought of as an 'it.' 2 - I'm not so sure about ...

piepiemann and Hunter's posts conflict.... I suppose I'll try and combine the two. Alicia "One, two, three, lift," The blue eyed man instructed and together, he and the one he ...

Could I have the fairy? Name= Skye Riverdale. Age= 20. Race= Fairy. Hair= Long and dark blue. Eyes= Pale blue with a touch of silver. Wings= Pale blue. Family= Just ...

Kevin When Riley didn't turn up to school the next morning I really began to worry and soon located Olivia and Roxy. "Where is she?" Roxy asked in a worried ...