Rydia

That one's very pretty. The angle is perfect and that filter really does highlight the trees well. I wish there was a pretty lighthouse near me.

Lol. I'm so glad that books still hold high influence in a world run by computers =)

This isn't really poetry and you have a tense switch in the first line. It should be when I wake... Other than that, there isn't really much to critique. Order ...

Lol. Hey there Miriam and welcome to YWS. I also like cake so we have something in common =) Pm me if you need any help navigating the site or ...

You're making a business out of critiquing? :shock:

Ooooh Digital Fortress. That's a nice book too and Angels and Demons. Dan Brown always makes for an interesting read...

Hey there, it's nice to meet you. PM me if you're in need of anything, Heather xx

1. The legs were rather thin at the bottom but generally it was very pretty and I love the hair. Some real attitude there. Lol. 2. Love these. The kitty ...

"Wow, that was some brave spirit guy," Heather murmured as they voice ceased to exist. Matt snorted and shook his head. "Try having him in your head. He's not so ...

I'll join, sounds like fun =)

Skye I was the first to arrive at Sarka's house but Karana wasn't far behind. We sat in a small, lightly furnished room with Lethero and Sarka and I listened ...

Kevin "You still can't... shouldn't..." I turned away again and clenched my fists in frustration. I couldn't help but feel worried, afraid, concerned, guilty and yes, there was a stroke ...

Don't worry, we wont kill your characters. River I saw Kasko return and his words registered in my mind but they would not solidify until I had touched him. I ...

Alicia One of the humans, our commanding officer, went in search of more survivors and the Sarge went with him. Lance remained behind and positioned himself a short distance to ...

Sorry but I don't like this one. Listen to Claudette when she tells you to scrap the repetition and also, the rhyme just doesn't seem to work with this style ...