Rydia

Scipio and Heather left the ship and stood outside staring across at the landscape. "Wow, it's beautiful," Hether murmered. "It sure is," Scipio replied, "We should travel more often." "Speaking ...

Someone with the name Beethoven was a member here? Does anyone know if she's still active? I think I know her... As for the work, I like symiosis and the ...

Jayne Jayne reached Keala university and stared up at the cluster of buildings. A boy with dark, braided hair was just leaving the beautiful piece of architecture to her right. ...

I'm not too into abstract art but this is pretty cool. Perhaps it would be better if you varied the faces slightly?

Amos looks pretty good. A little rough in places but well drawn. His hair is really nice and a good choice of outfit. Simple but very right. Swallow has such ...

I just read the first two pages of your original and I don't think I know enough about guns to join this one...

Wow, don't you love how old posts get brought back up? This script was great but what is with you people and killing cats?

Celeste "Hold him still," I murmured as I placed a steady hand upon his crimson chest. The blood seeped through his wound and trickled across my fingers as he screamed ...

I liked this. Slightly creepy with a pretty good atmosphere. Some of your descriptions are very nice. It took me a short while to realise that the male character was ...

Dungeons and dragons? Ooooh.How I miss that game! I shall join but my knowledge on the American education system is a little rusty. Name= Jayne Peterson. Age= 19. Grade Level= ...

I know the others have mentioned it but I love the simple honesty of this piece. I shall make a few specific suggestions before I move onto more general points ...

Ah. Sorry about that. The second kitty, Hilary, she reminded me of a guy I know. She has his sort ofhair but yeah, I suppose he's just a touch feminine. ...

I really liked this until you jumped persepctive. The last two parts seem rather random. Perhaps you should try to attactch them. Maybe your character finds the history book and ...

This is pretty good and I only have one specific suggestion so I'll cover that first and then move on to more general points... I sit before you, infront of ...

I thought that it was good where drawing is concerned though admittedly the subject only works if we know you. Don't worry about that though. It's cute and the kittys ...