Rydia

Hi there, it appears I've found a piece of your work =) Okay, well I liked this poem but the rhythm is a little out in places and some lines ...

I really liked this and I'm a down to Earth sort of girl so if you still need that paper weight I'm right here. I love the imagery of the ...

Falcon "Perhaps a new race. One easier to control?" I suggested as we made our way deeper and deeper into the forest. "That's a possibility I suppose. They certainly weren't ...

Celeste "Perhaps you will one day. Would you mind helping me up?" I asked Serkas. "Of course not ma'am," He replied. I took his hand gratefully and was glad to ...

Hello again. I think you meant this one, yes? Okay... It is a time when old meets new. When horse meets car, and sword meets gun. History [s]was[/s] is becoming ...

Have you ever watched dragonball z piepiemann? Basically, a group of fighters defend the Earth against all the aliens who attack but not all of them are humans and some ...

Skye I rolled my eyes and then peered at my own horse. Before me stood a tall, golden gelding with expressive brown eyes. "Mine's called Aztec Angel," I decided. "That's ...

Jayne Tylor stared down at the crushed pot in bewilderment. "You don't know many artists do you? They're all perfectionists," I laughed lightly as Chan returned. She spared me a ...

Ah. I believe I was pronouncing Lira's name wrong. I shall make a mental note...

Don't worry about it. We all make our little mistakes and I'm glad I could help =)

Hello again! Okay, let's get my little suggestions out of the way first and then I'll give you a few general comments - Below that building was the actual Senate ...

No problem Timea. I'm glad I could help =)

I think the mistakes have all been caught and I liked all the different view points in this piece. Don't do that too often though. Concentrate on the main characters ...

This has some potential but I have a few suggestions - A image of a young man in his early twenties appeared. [Should be 'An' rather than 'A'] “See you ...

There's a lot of information in such a short prologue and so many new names but that's okay because a lot of science fiction is like that. I know very ...