Rydia

I think the first and the last are my favourites. Number one has an interesting foreground but the background is a bit busy and distracts me from the boots and ...

'I don't want to hear it' rather than 'I don't want to here it' but this is really old so... yeah. It's great though. I love the two characters. They're ...

This was really cool. I haven't been in the chat room too often but this seems to fit. Claudette and Mattster certainly have the best lines. Basically, great job!

Oh, I didn't mean the all should be in lower case. I meant that you need an 'a' in there that you missed out. Sorry about that, guess I should ...

To be honest, this seemed pretty repetitive and the rhyming was really forced in places. Here are a few changes I would make - I write this poem from my ...

"Sounds like a good idea," Scipio remarked. "Yeah. I'm going to start reading now," Alice agreed. Scipio nodded and decided to leave her to it. He wandered out into the ...

I shall join but I haven't finished reading book 7 so not too many spoilers please? Name= Kate Glass Age= 15 Year= Five Wand= Willow, 14 inches, Unicorn Tail House= ...

Looks interesting... we shall need more of a plot but that should develop in time. Name= Julia Stone. Nickname= Jewel. Race= Pixie. Age= 21. Hair= Waist length and fiery red. ...

I think this is actual lyrics rather than lyrical poetry, especially if you have music that goes with it. Lyrical poetry isn't really made to be sung... Anyway, as for ...

Nice. I like Amber best. Very pretty.

Hi there! A few suggestions... They were counting down till midnight. [I think 'til' is the correct abbreviation. 'Till' sort of suggests one of those things that the cashier sits ...

I know what you mean about the big words. Sometimes her style can be a touch annoying. The ghost writer is Andrew Neiderman and he follows her style so closely. ...

Have you read the whole series Claudette? They get more and more tragic and some of it really is horrific!

1. It would be better if the board/plank was centered and it's not the most interesting. 2. This one has a good, eerie atmosphere and I like the broken path ...

"Wow. And I only got twelve," Heather gasped, a touch regretfully. "That's plenty," Scipio declared hurriedly. "And you can always buy more at the next planet." The two girls nodded ...