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Lily "So the volunteer loses both ways," Tera noted. "Yeah," Zire sighed, nodding in agreement. "I'll do it," I decided. "What?" Kate exclaimed, "Wasn't you listening to the dangers?" "Foolish ...

Awesome, I love these books! And I'll be happy to help anyone who's unfamiliar with the concept of Daemons and such. Name= Marie Lotus Age= 18 Hair= Red Eyes= Brown ...

Scipio hugged Alice and then turned to face the hall in general. "Hey! Alice is awake!" Scipio shouted. Heads popped out of their rooms and hurried across to greet their ...

Julia "Oh yeah. I had a great time," The elf muttered sarcastically. "What's your name?" I asked, standing beside him. He turned to run again but Karana was there, completing ...

Olivia Friday night came and I glanced across at Jake who was pacing the small living room. "It's not tonight," I reminded him. "I know that," He snapped. "Think I ...

Kate On Saturday, I found myself in a secluded corner of the library when three slytherin boys approached me. "You. You know Lindsay right?" The tallest of the three demanded. ...

1. A close up of one jar of marbles might have been more interesting but it's nice. 2. Perfect angle, gorgeous cat. I love the detail of the eye. Very ...

You have some good detail. The first is well drawn but I think the head is a touch too large and perhaps some of the hair should be covering her ...

Hmmm. I'm surprised no one has done this one yet.... [spoiler]Drop_Dead_Fred - Fred. May he rest in piece. [/spoiler]

Alicia "Drivers first," I reminded Llorinlir as he returned fire on the spellcaster on the roof of the middle vehicle. "And let him kill us?" Llorinlir snorted. I ducked a ...

There wasn't really enough action early on but the variety of sentences was good and your description was effective in places. Two specific suggestions - The dentist, a balding man ...

Your description was nice but work on characterization a touch. Also, a few specific suggestions - Lyllan was traditionally the first one walking around and the [s]villages[/s] villagers had become ...

My favourite chapter so far and yes, I thought that Delucio was always a good person deep down but he has still done some horrible things. Freeing Kiera might redeem ...

Joint favourites are POA and OOTP, probably because they feature Sirius quite a lot. He was and always will be my favourite character. DH is good but Fred and George ...

fusion - Thanks very much for the suggestions. I shall drag Claire down here later today so that we can make some changes. Jasmine - Hi there, thanks for the ...