Rydia

So werewolves are born from the blood line of vampires? Or of other werewolves? I just want to be clear on that point...

It's simple and repetitive and generally very pleasant. This was easy to read, even without music, and I love the first stanza. As a poem, it would probably be too ...

Kevin "I'm over it," Riley declared. For a moment, I stared at her and sat back down, my body drained of strength. "Have you thought of any names?" Olivia asked. ...

*Sure. She's your character.* Tigra Hidena charged straight into the room, stabbing at a large goblin and ducking the blows from his fists. Serin was facing a slightly smaller goblin ...

Hehe. Nice introduction...or lack of. I look forward to finding out who you are.

Instead of trod on the last line, you should have tread. The tense change confused me a touch. Other than that, your rhythm is out a little in places but ...

As it is, it's a cute little poem but I agree that it's not original enough. Who hasn't written an 'if' poem before? I certainly have and it ran along ...

1. This is fabulous! Those colours are amazing and the reflections are so clear. It's beautiful. 2. The shapes are interesting, the colours are nice and it's all very elegant ...

I have to agree that both of them have really thick necks. Tomas' head should be a little larger, or his body a little smaller but the expression is good ...

Works for me but let's see what the others think.

"Sorry Matt, she's gone," Bella replied, suppressing a giggle. "Gone? And you didn't think to tell me?" Matt demanded. "The popsical was her parting gift," Adam explained, "I thought that ...

Kevin "Where is he?" I demanded as I stormed into Ninen and Riley's flat. "Kev, what's going on?" Roxy asked. "You've not heard?" I snarled. "Kevin, you're scaring me. Please ...

Lilly Nervously, I stood and waited while the others took their seats. Too soon, Zire approached me and took hold of my body. He leaned in closer and I felt ...

Yeah, we do need more of a plot. Perhaps because of the huge magical explosion, the world is now endangered? Like it messed with the magical protection of the planet ...

Thanks Kel. It's good to have you with us again and it's only normal that you want your character played how you see him so feel free to correct us ...