Rydia

Hi Jasmine, glad to have you with us! An interesting character too...

This was good and you have some great characterization. I don't know if I'm supposed to dislike Chris but I get the feeling he's a bit of a coward and ...

Melody “Innocent until proven guilty,” Maverhov shrugged. He took a drag on the Smoke and then went on. "I've seen this a few times before and there's a sure way ...

Don't worry, it didn't ruin it at all. Apollo - I have to agree that the expression is great and you've coloured him well but his neck is a touch ...

I have to agree that it would be better without the repitition and perhaps you could go deeper into what he has done. Rather than just stating his deeds, describe ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS. Don't worry if you're not too great at poetry (I'm certainly not) because the people here are great and they'll help you develop your ...

My Life Tree even seems to brighten with her song as its branches and [s]leafs[/s] leaves seem to come alive in the sunset’s glow. She said drying her tears with ...

Hi there. Just a few little suggestions my friend... It has been made more powerful than any sword has a right to be , through crushed prayers, betrayal, and tears ...

Melody "But Barkus, he hates magicians," I protested. "Yeah but you're not a magician. You're one of us," Barkus reminded me as we reached the entrance to the boss' hideout. ...

Kevin I put the phone down, my hand still shaking with the effort of making that call. It was strange. I didn't feel any better, there was no sense of ...

That's pretty cool but the hand looks seriously freaky! I love all the words across the picture but the red top is too bright and distracts me so that I'm ...

Kate "I'm Sarabella and this is..." She hesitated and for a moment, I considered keeping my mouth shut. "Kate," I sighed. "And don't worry, we'll say Garret hexed himself. He ...

I think Craig's neck is a little long in the first and his head is a touch small. Also, the arm holding the cigarette is too thin but you've done ...

The final line is so perfect! But if she did not kill the flea then she did not prove that his fears were false (that killing the flea would kill ...

Lilly "But we need you," Alexynia added. Zire turned as if to rebuke this fact and then stared at us. What a pitiful group we must have made. Alexynia was ...