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Perhaps giants or ogres or something? Or maybe necromancers who want to claim the secrets of raising the dead and stuff for themselves?

Celeste It was early afternoon when I arrived home and I collapsed onto my bed, allowing myself to drift into a light sleep. It can't have been more than a ...

That was sort of the idea. Lol. Julia "Then why are you coming?" I asked, observing the stranger. He was tall with wide, sloping shoulders and dishevelled, brown hair. His ...

Kate "I might be wrong but I think Kate just slipped Garret some Veritaserum," Xander noted, a touch of admiration in his voice. "But where did you get a thing ...

Oh wow, Askim is an awesome name! I'm changing my vote to Askim ;)

I agree that the main character should probably be a little older but this sounds like it will be an interesting story and I look forward to reading chapter one.

It's a short scene so not much to critique but it's nice. I like the little insight into Gladman's life and career. Ultra is nosey though. Tut tut. As an ...

Welcome all new members and I hope you enjoy the site. If you'd like someone to take a look at your work or you're having trouble finding your way around, ...

The way I see it, narrative poetry is poetry that tells a story like The Rime of the Ancient Mariner - Then, lyrical poetry is sort of emotional poetry. Lyrical ...

I found this mildly amusing and it has the potential to be hilarious if you work on your structure and content. First, it needs some punctuation and I think I'm ...

Just as Bella finished Matt, Heather hit Chris for the fifteenth time and both reluctantly moved to the side. "Good work. How many hits did you take?" Heather asked, still ...

That expression is so her and I love the eyes! The hair is beautiful, the helmet perfect. The shield's a nice touch and that outfit is superb, very goddess. I ...

**Lol. I love you too writer chick =) and yes, I did have a certain book in mind and I'm just sorry that you didn't have the opportunity to switch ...

They are some of the cutest dogs there are! You are so lucky. Personally I would give him a name that fits what he looks like and seenas I can't ...

Amelia I led the newly bonded riders to their new rooms and showed them where their Pterodactyls would sleep. "Can we ride them now?" Geros asked eagerly. "If you wish ...