Rydia

I think she's brilliant. Or rather, you're brilliant I suppose. Lol. I love the hair and the expression reminds me of myself when I'm day-dreaming. The outfit is really cool ...

Kevin The weeks turned into months and still I hadn't seen, heard from or spoken to Riley. Not since that short phone call. "You can't expect me to do this, ...

I think she can be apprenticed to an invented character Jasmine and just have her in a lesson to start with perhaps? Then she can meet the other characters when ...

Reading this for a second time, after reading the first parts, makes so much more sense now! Lol. Poor Fin. I wish Halee would make up with him but then, ...

I think this is my favourite part so far where your writing is concerned. Again, you need more descriptions but the interaction between your characters was good and the plot ...

Her Most Noble Lady Heather the Implac of Hope End Hope End? Oh dear, that does not sound good. Just when I need hope as well...

I have to agree that I wasn't fond of the epilogue. It wasn't just the last line, it was everything. The names of the children, the relationships between the children ...

Just a few general comments this time. I like your description of his hands and the scar and, of course, of your character. I'd like to know a little more ...

This was pretty good but you could add some more description and such to improve it. Here's a few specific points first - I would probably be disgraced, [I'd use ...

I had. I love Ben and Jerrys! How can people not have heard of it?

Just for you Fire... Olivia We stopped by a stream for a quick drink and the female vampire headed further into the woods. "Does anyone want to race?" I asked. ...

I think it would have been nicer if you'd zoomed in on the flowers and the cloud a bit but it's pretty and I like how the cloud is almost ...

I love the guy. His outfit is absolutely amazing and the hair is great, especially the moustache and beard. The way you've crossed his arms is a little awkward because ...

1. The silhouette effect is nice and I love the blue colour but you should have concentrated either on the figure or the elephant. It's not as effective with both ...

I think the first would look better if you were zoomed in just a touch more or even cropping would work. Just remove a little of the background. As for ...