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Julia "Only 126? That is young," Ryouku commented, looking rather worried. "In fact, perhaps a little too young for such a dangerous mission." "Actually that sounds rather old to me ...

Hmmm. I think I want another male character. Name= Mathew Stone Gender= Male Age= 24 Appearance= Mathew is tall and broad shouldered with short, black hair and deep brown eyes. ...

Ruby "This is the place," The pilot declared in a neutral, monotone voice. "Really?" Topaz asked sarcastically as she rolled her eyes at her younger sister. Ruby smiled in return ...

I think that puts me in about nine active storybooks.

Celeste It was about an hour after we set off that I realised Joseph was following us. "We're being followed," I stated. "We are?" Zora asked. She took a quick, ...

Hello there Emma, it's nice to meet you and if you're a friend of Caitlin, I'm sure we'll get allong. I'm Heather but feel free to call me kitty and ...

This is brilliant and it was really clever of you to write from someone else's point of view. I have to agree that I was confused as to whether they ...

This is a touch over dramatic, especially at the beginning but it's not a bad story. In general you should add some more description and expand it. As for some ...

Pure brilliance! I love it Snoink, it's hilarious. I think my favourite part is when the man with no name comes on. Poor guy. I can totally understand how he ...

I voted for Mars. I have to agree with the others, Saturn would be a beautiful planet to visit but I currently value my life...

1. This one is great! I love how the bird is just off centre and it's colouring is so interesting. 2. This is a brilliant close up! I like your ...

Nice to meet you Ari and welcome to YWS. It's always nice to meet another person who loves kitties =)

Oh wow. You two, this is awesome! I love all the action and conflict that you have in your posts and they fit together so well. You both have brilliant ...

Ooooh. I like the 'back story' on the orbs and it's certainly more effective than having someone explain it through pure speech. I simply can't wait to see this done ...

They're very good and very accurate. I think the guys clothes should be a touch darker but they're really well drawn if my memory is correct (I'm afraid I haven't ...