Rydia

Okay, here's my knight =) Name= Sir Nicholas Gender= Male Age= 23 Allegiance= English Appearance= Nicholas has chestnut brown hair and clear, blue eyes. He is tall with an average ...

A few specific points first and then I shall make some general comments - She wasn’t pretty, but [s]in[/s] popularity, well, she had that in spades. It wasn’t fair to ...

Ah but you implied that trying to handle so many characters was foolish, yes? And at your age I would have agreed. Don't worry if you find it difficult, it ...

I don't think I can beat the previous bribes so I shall refrain from trying but may the best briber win. Good luck all!

"Chris and Bella are coming," Alice stated before Heather had time to teleport out. "Oh?" Heather asked. "That makes six. More than half the crew. I suppose this is now ...

I want a ticket! Give me one! I loved the action in this scene and there's so much conflict. Well done. Your characters are well defined and I can't wait ...

I think that first person is great for poetry as long as it's done well. I love it when people write from first person as a persona and I think ...

Look at the top of the photo in the centre Lucy. See those leaves? One's a bird :wink:

Now if you had posted this yesterday, you would have saved me a lot of unecessary brain work. Lol. The parachuting into the middle of nowhere sounds like an awesome ...

"But surely we can do something to help," Heather protested. "Yeah and four people isn't enough for a mutiny," Alice agreed. "Fine," Matt agreed. "Go back to the ship and ...

I'm certainly insane but I'm not so sure about an idiot. I think the most characters I've tried to control at once would be six and one of those got ...

Kate I waved goodbye to the members of the other houses and then headed to the Slytherin common room with Lindsay and Sarabella. "I think I might just sleep down ...

You are getting negligent my friend but can I blame you? At 100 it must be very difficult to avoid typos and such. Here's what I found - He stopped ...

I liked this chapter. I'll admit that you could have spent longer on the conflict with the other ship and more description would be nice but it's a pretty good ...

This one is a bit clearer and it's good but I'd prefer more shading and perhaps a little more detail like freckles and such.