Rydia

Welcome to the site. I'm Heather and I speak very little French but if you need any help, feel free to pm me and I hope you enjoy the site.

I like it. Didn't see what it was before but I like what you've got at the moment =)

Some of these were really good and you have a nice variety. I love the second one in the CSI section and the very last one. Some were a little ...

Julia I slowly eased myself back to the ground and clutched my daggers so tightly that I could feel the carvings upon the hilt of the daggers embedding themselves into ...

Kalilah "Jhadi!" I exclaimed as Alla brought the squire towards us. "Miss Kalilah?" Jhadi asked. "What happened? Hw did you get seperated from Sir Jordan?" "I don't know. I got ...

Julia I woke with a burning fever but shivered as chills ran down my back. 'Not now. Not now. I don't want one now. I don't want the pain,' I ...

Kalilah "We need to fight," I whispered. "But how?" A woman who's name I vaguely remembered as Alla began to once more probe the room with her eyes. Serra joined ...

Hey there Magnificent! We met a few times in chat and I'm glad to see that you're dealving deeper into the site. If you'd like a critique then feel free ...

Of course it's a good idea and I would have a go at reading it. I've only studied Spanish for a year but I'm taking it as an AS next ...

The storie's in a seperate thread Sabradan. Go there and post! - - that goes for the rest of you too =)

No I didn't Whence. Would you like a date with him? You might be able to win one if you enter my contest ;)

Wow. Okay where to start... I'm guessing you don't want advice on your writing at this moment in time so I'll begin with advice on Richard. It sounds like you're ...

Oh, the second one is great! I think he's running, Kat. The first leg is at the front and the second is hidden behind his hand. Is that right Sponson ...

I agree that the comma isn't needed there and perhaps have a full stop after sky. Other than that though, I think the simple structure works really well here and ...

Kate It started to get dark but I wasn't ready to go back in yet so I angled my broom towards hogwarts and landed on the roof. "Here looks as ...