Rydia

Luke "I say I want to hear my soldier's reasoning for considering an offer of peace. Please explain yourself Luke," General Cronan appeared to be losing patience but I spared ...

It's a nice start. You seem to be telling rather than showing most of the time but then, it's a prologue so that doesn't matter too much. The plot you ...

Luke "Three Sea assassins behind us," The back scout from General Samark's regiment rode to the front and began to explain that there were two men and a girl racing ...

Lol. Perhaps I shall :wink:

No problem and pm me if there's ever anything else you'd like me to read.

My friends aren't into writing but I've co-written with my older sister for quite a few years now and when we were younger, we wrote seperate stories and poems and ...

I've no idea. Seriously, I don't know what I'm best at but for anyone who's read my work, feel free to tell me.

Hi again! First off, did you mean to repeat that first part over and over again? If so, I wouldn't and if, as I expect, it was a typo, you ...

On the technical point, you're completely correct so my thanks for bringing that to my attention and as to if he's blind, I don't think he is but it's an ...

Sometimes I get a really cool title in my head and devlop a poem around that. Others it's a general idea or theme and then there's always the times when ...

Oh no! Fred's missing? That's terrible.

Kate It was a long, tiring night and by the end of it, I was barely any closer to becoming an animagus. "How do I make them go away?" I ...

Hehe. My apologies, Alice, I shall post straight away. Celeste "Help you?" Joseph spluttered in disbelief. "Coming with us?" Vince demanded. "Well you seem to be fine with a total ...

I've never written solely for the purpose of being published but yes, I'd love to get some of my work published and have made attempts to have it published but ...

Hi there. First off, I'd like to say that I found this story interesting. I like the concept of having a dumb character but perhaps she should use sign language ...