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Luke "Wait. Are you sure they wont hurt you?" I called after Aren who turned and nodded. "Yeah. Whatever got into them, I have a feeling that it involved the ...

I've read it now =) I thought the articles were all really great!

Olivia "Keep my hand off of her?" The werewolf smirked and his grip tightened so that my arm went pale. The owner of the cold, hard voice stepped forward and ...

Kiara I smiled grimly as I watched the creature take its final breath and then I turned to go but I paused to listen to the voices of the creature's ...

Luke "Keep behind me Amanta and step back, Aren. If you're with us then take Amanta and get her to the centre of camp," I backed away as I said ...

Coal I strode through the castle confidently and the squires and servants bowed before hurrying out of the way. 'My' fellow knights greeted me with salutes and waves of the ...

A rather action packed installment and you left it on a cliff-hanger which is always a good idea. A few specific comments - The people in the town [s]have[/s] had ...

I think the first one is great. You have such an awesome angle and the lighting is good but perhaps photoshopping the keys wouldn't be such a bad idea. The ...

Amelia I jumped back as the boy stepped closer and began rubbing his head absent mindedly. "Man that hurts," The boy blinked a few times and then looked across to ...

You haven't missed too much. The main parts have been that they watched a magical meteor shower together and Kate and Jesse have learnt how to become animaguses (But the ...

Luke "How about we discuss the changes to the outlined plan now?" I asked. "Changes?" Silver repeated. "And why would we change the plan?" "I already pointed out your major ...

Hehe. I think this is just what I needed to read today actually. I've been having one of those bad days myself but I found this rather amusing, especially that ...

A few minor suggestions first - He made a wall out of bark that had fallen of off trees and two more out of [s]leafs[/s] leaves and vines that he ...

Olivia I pulled Kelsey out of the way and glared at the werewolf. "You are. You're defending those scum!" The werewolf spat before drawing his teeth into a grimace. "Any ...

I'm starting to like Khor a little better. Here are a few suggestions - On[s]e[/s] the other three walls were windows. Khor looked at him, [s]than[/s] then at the weapons ...