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It's still unanimus my friend =)

Lol. They're the characters in sokool's novel. You'd have to read the other chapters for it to make sense and I strongly advise you to do so, they're very well ...

Hmm. Do you have an awards system perhaps? I think that the points and stars systems on YWS work really well so maybe you could set up something like that ...

This is very nice. I love the posture and the shadow in the corner. The eyes could have been more circular and closer to the same size and the cobweb ...

I think sokool made some excellent points on your sentence structure so pay lots of attention to her post when you're editing. I mostly just have a few typos for ...

Hey there! I'm pretty sure I've seen you around the site but it's very amazinful of you to introduce yourself. Hehe. Anyway, welcome to the site and let me know ...

Amelia "I don't trust them," Colin hissed. "And neither do I but I wouldn't mind a wade through the river and at least we know to keep our distance." "I ...

They can try. We have to think of some way to bring the knights back in too.

Awesome plot advance! Kate I hurried down to Hagrid's hut and knocked upon the door. "Hagrid!" I shouted. "I need your help!" I knocked again but no answer came. Where ...

Luke A little later that day, I found myself stood in a clearing facing Amanta with a sword in my hand and a shield. Amanta was equipped similarly and Jamie ...

Hehe. I'm with Write me completely but the avatars are cool.

Kalilah I hesitated for just a moment but I knew I had to do something. Jhadi and the pirate wrestled on the ground but then the pirate got his sword ...

Hehe. We do make a good team though =) And my character reminds me of another, I wonder if you can guess which... Amelia I stolled down a few dark ...

Hey Lauren and welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or would like a critique, feel free to pm me and I hope you enjoy your time here.

How can you feel as if something is wrong? I think that this chapter's just fine. In fact, I love it, especially the discussion between Valery and Erik at the ...