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Re: Hello
Hey there Rachel, it's lovely to meet you. If you need help navigating the site or would like a critique then feel free to pm me. Oh and welcome to ...
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Re: Me
Hey there, Kyte. I'm Heather and I'm also well aquainted with Brian Jaques. Welcome to the site and I hope you enjoy your time here. Oh and thanks for the ...
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Re: Unknown Story Chap. 7 part 2
[s]They’re[/s] their pace had slowed but they had not yet given up. In general, I think this chapter could have been more descriptive and you need to start giving the ...
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: Unknown Story Chap. 7 part 1
I really liked this chapter and the three characters you introduced are very interesting. I'm really fond of Vathen and I love the place this is set in. A few ...
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Re: YWS: The Gathering
Amelia Colin and Infra placed the young man on the grass and he stared up at us with sharp, silver eyes. "Don't even think about it," Colin scolded as Elyn ...
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Re: The black magicians
Kiara "Relax and put your weapons away," I scolded as both the angels, the half elf and the girl reached for blades. "And let a black magician get us?" The ...
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Re: Arabian Knights
That's great! Kalilah As soon as my feet touched the ground, I closed my eyes and smiled before throwing my arms out and spinning in a wide circle. I opened ...
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Re: Not all men are pigs
Hehe. A very interesting poem, Reyu, but lose some of the rhyme and work on your rhythm. I must say the ending is awesome though and I love the general ...
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Re: Harry Potter
Kate I couldn't sleep so I was wandering around Hogwarts when I saw Adam up ahead. I almost called out to im but then he disapeared into one of the ...
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Re: Piracy Upon the Sea
Then jump off the ship and come join us! I'm so glad to see you're still here =)
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: New Meat ;D
Hey there Lex, welcome to the site and let me know when you've posted that story. I'd be glad to give you a review.
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: A Moonlit Stroll
Okay so the title needs some work but this is a possible entry for Alainna's contest and is therefore exactly 500 words long. The problem is I have two possible ...
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Re: Piracy Upon the Sea
Lol! How right you are. I just miss her so much! You can't blame me for transferring her to another story can you? And don't worry, I think I've neglected ...
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Re: Harry Potter
Kate "Crucio!" Sedry's lips moved and the sound issued from his mouth but I could barely believe the word that those lips had formed. Lindsay began to scream in agony ...
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Re: Harry Potter
Kate "Linds! Get out of here now!" I shouted. Then Jesse appeared and I cursed loudly. Suddenly, Sedry threw himself at me and he snatched his wand from my hand ...
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