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Rydia

  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Here's guy number two... and thanks =) Name= Caleb Age= 25 Hair= Dark brown Eyes= Forget-me-not blue Gang= He doesn't have one. Caleb is headstrong, stubborn, proud, obnoxious and very ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: New

    Hi there, welcome to the site. I think I saw you briefly in the chat room. I'm Heather and it's nice to meet you.

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    You can't make me decide. Hmm. Am I allowed two guys?

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: If you could meet ten people online in person....

    I want to meet everyone, Kylan. In fact, I'll gladly give you a personal mention on my list =)

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    One that's already made. Who wants him? Hehe. Tylar "My money's on the Cobras" Pyro grinned across at me as he took another swig of his drink. He was a ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Name= Tylar Age= 21 Hair= Black Eyes= Green Gang= The Seekers. Little is known about the gang and they have no allies and no enemies. Complexion= Medium tan Personality= Inteligent, ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Re-introduction of an...introduction. =P

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS and I hope the dial-up doesn't cause you too many problems. If you'd like a critique or help navigating the site, feel free to pm ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Scripts Re: Flowers for the Wake

    Hello sharky! I love this play and I can assure you that the theatre troup will be delighted. The dialogue flowed well, your characters are dramatic and believable and the ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: If you could meet ten people online in person....

    Only 10? Gosh that's hard... Here we go then, in no particular order... 1. My italian friend David. 2. Jasmine. 3. Nate. 4.Claudette. 5. Snoink. 6. Staring_at_Ceiling. 7. RED. 8. ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Archive Re: The black magicians

    Kiara I hurried through the trees, pausing every now and then to check the direction of the black magicians. How could they have got so far away? With a sigh, ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Archive Re: VG Rumble

    Why do you get to be dungeon master? Lol. It's a great idea and I am so going to have to dig the board-game out tonight and force my siblings ...

    Sep 7, 2007
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: TIGWS: Rise of the Rebellion

    I like this chapter. Your descriptions of the new characters are very nice and you have some great dialogue. I think your description of scenery still needs a little work ...

    Sep 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Unknown Story Chap. 8 part 1

    Hmmm. This was a little confusing and the whole falling thing was rather strange to be honest. A yellow beam of light shone [s]thought[/s] through the crack of the door ...

    Sep 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Unknown Story Chap. 7 part 3

    Yeah, I agree that the fight scene needs some work but generally I liked this part. But his body and mind [s]was[/s] were telling him he was in a comfortable ...

    Sep 6, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Not all men are pigs

    No problem, I'm glad I could help.

    Sep 6, 2007


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