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I don't mind at all TN, in fact, feel free to choose his name. It should be an interesting piece of conflict. And pride and prejudice is an excellent novel.

That sounds pretty cool. I watched a film based on the seven deadly sins actually where seven people were killed, each in the form of one of the sins sort ...

His features seem very close together and the moustache is a little off but inn general, you have a really good style. The shading works, the eyes are cool and ...

This sounds interesting. So I get to create a Victorian character? Okay... Name= Isabelle Howden. Age= 19 Hair= Long and dark brown. It is often worn in tight ringlets. Eyes= ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! You have good taste in play writers, my friend. I studied Williams recently and he's certainly an excellent writer as is Friel though I've ...

Tylar "Hey," Lance called, pushing past civilians to reach Pyro and me. We were in the street, near the centre of town. "Something wrong?" I asked. "No," He replied. "We ...

The others have caught most of the mistakes and to be honest, I didn't really like this chapter. It's too random for me. I mean, why has the whole world ...

That's not such a bad idea actually. I'll see how we go with it but if the unanswered posts don't fall rapidly enough I'll organise a contest.

I remember reading this one. Hmmm. You don't appear to have made any major changes and I think you have more typos than you did before The info dumping still ...

I haven't read the books but this looks interesting. I can't believe I haven't seen it before. Name= Adelaide Nickname= Adi Age= 19 Class= Commoner Hair= Long and dark red, ...

This is really interesting. You took a rather unoriginal idea, threw in a few nice phrases and a pretty jagged rhythm and yet... I like it. Lol. In general, the ...

I like the plot ideas but I don't think the paragraph you've written so far is all that great. I's rather cliche and the description could be stronger. Go with ...

Oh wow. Good luck with those competitions and I'd love to take a look at your work when you get round to posting it!

1. A close up would have been better but I bet it's not easy to take a photo of a moving animal... 2. I love this one. I think I'd ...

Seenas most people don't seem to understand class, I'm going to tell you what you are based on your weaons and such. Karana is probably an archer, Ilum Ro a ...