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Re: VG Rumble
Raven I smiled and let out a short, pleasant burst of laughter. "Go ahead my friends but I don't think my power will be so great against that monster." "True," ...
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Re: 1984 by George Orwell
I recommend this book to everyone. It's a very thought provoking read and extremely well written.
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Re: Rugburns
Hi there Misty! So I don't think your poetry is as awesome as your short stories but no worries, this is the right place to get some tips on improving ...
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Re: So you say..
Hmmm. I think you need to fix the grammar of this poem so here's a neater version - Mister, you say , "speak when you 're spoken to , " ...
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Re: Ville Valo
Some of the lines could be smoother but the eyes are great and my main concern is that he looks very feminine, even with the underarm hair. Also, his posture's ...
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Re: Sponson's Year of AP Independent Art
Wow, way to do a self portrait! Lol. I'm not so sure about how accurate it is seenas I haven't seen a photo but I love your use of colour ...
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Re: Life Of Crime
Caleb "You got a good driver," I noted as we set off again. "Thanks," Tiny replied. "Killer, right?" "Antonio told you about him too?" Tiny raised an eyebrow and shook ...
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Re: title-'the surprise'
Hmm. I suppose we list one plot line each? Okay... A story about a woman planning on telling her husband that she's pregnant.
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Re: wierdly coloured animal club
What a random post! And it appears that I only half qualify...
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Re: Master of Murder by Christopher Pike
I used to love Pike! He's brilliant at writing books for people in their early teens and you should certainly check them out. In fact, I might re-read a few ...
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Re: A Million Little Pieces
Ah, I'm rather fond of tragic books and this looks like a good read. Anyone know the author?
Sep 10, 2007 -
Re: After by Francine Prose
That sounds like an interesting read. I love books that make you think!
Sep 10, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
Caleb "Don't worry, I'm a friend," I mumured as Killer and Tiny approached the car. At first she did not seem to recognise me and Killer tensed as he drew ...
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Re: Friday nightMARES
Hey there! First off this is really sweet and you have some good lines but your structure disintegrated towards the end and it feels more like poetic prose than lyrics. ...
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Re: stupidstupidstupidstupid stupidstupid(expletivedeleted)
We won? Lol. I don't follow sport but I suppose it's nice to have a win now and then. Go England! And sorry that you lost Sabradan.
Sep 10, 2007
