Rydia

Oooh. This is a great start to the chapter! Have I told you how brilliant you are at creating and developing loveable characters? I can't wait for the romances to ...

Sorry if I confused anyone, hopefully this post will clear it up... Isabelle Pretty soon all the guests were arrived and seated around the large dining table with my father ...

Katalyn 2:00pm "I'm not sitting here any longer!" Mike exclaimed, shoving the car door open and slamming it behind him with a tremendous bang. "Where are you going?" Katalyn demanded ...

I thought this part was pretty good and much easier to understand than certain previous chapters. Lol. Anyway, some typos I spotted - He wrenched the covers off of himself ...

The plot sounds wasy to relate to which is always good and if you have more details and other conflicts then I'm sure it's fine. As for what to do, ...

Oooh. This sounds like just the sort of book I need at the moment. I think I'll look into getting myself a copy. Who's the author?

Sounds like a good author. I shall add him to my list.

Hi there! It's lovely to meet you. You seem like an interesting person.

In general, this needs to be extended, you need to add more description, more action, more plot, more everything before I can give you a propper critique. One piece of ...

I think it's an excellent idea!

Kalilah "I was sort of hoping there would be a village near by," I sighed. "Perhaps if we threw it in the sea?" Nina suggested. Alla, Serra and Jhadi all ...

Amelia "Fine," I muttered. "You can clean the decks." The boy grudgingly agreed under the condition that he got his own sword and then I led him through various taverns ...

Actually Gregory is on his way to my character's house having just left his home. Thought I'd clear that up. (My character is his cousin and he's going to stay ...

Kate The hufflepuffs weren't exactly rough as they ushered me out of their common room but tears leaked down my face at the sheer frustration of the situation. I had ...

I like 'the man he killed' by Thomas Hardy but there are many good poems. Perhaps something by Simon Armitage? Here's a site you can browse - - there should ...