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Amelia I leapt on my jetter and found myself heading towards the river. I was soon way ahead of the others and there I saw... "Look out!" I shouted as ...

Lol. Okay I suppose I could try... Raven Upon entering the throne room, the king stood from his chair and breathed a deep sigh of relief. "Excellent work my brave ...

That's cool. I love the posture and the top looks really good. Nice eyes too. Very zombie.

Caleb "Caleb! Caleb!" I turned at the sound of my name and looked up. At the entrance to the alley stood a tall woman with curly, red hair and striking ...

Kate I wanted to cry in frustration but finally I was starting to get a hold on the situation. As long as I didn't try to tell anyone about Adam, ...

This sounds like the sort of thing I read. Who's the author?

The second one sounds like it might be an interesting plot but you should probably give us more information if you want to get us interested.

Ah, I've heard of this one. Sounds interesting...

What you have is great but it's much too short to be a complete poem. Your imagery is pretty, you have a good vocabulary and the rhyme is effective but ...

Lol. Oh yes. Always fun to carry huge, noticeable objects. You ever tried walking through town with bright pink, 34 inch helium balloons? Lol. My friend collects posters and cardboard ...

Tylar "You coming?" I hissed as Pyro fell into step behind me. "To her club?" He asked. I nodded ever so slightly. "Naturally but you'd better go inside on your ...

Tylar When the gun shot went off, I swayed forward but Pyro planted a firm hand on upon my shoulder. I shook it away but nodded reluctantly. It was the ...

You have a nice, sophisticated style but I am dying for some more description of the characters. The setting is brilliant, your dialogue is engaging and in general, this was ...

Oooh. I love books about knights. I shall certainly get myself a copy.

Hmmm. This might be interesting. A song co-written by lots of members of YWS. Perhaps it should be in writing activities though. And as for another line... In the middle ...