Rydia

Thanks for your help Azila and at least we're getting close to 1000 now =)

Hmmm. I liked this but I think you need more description and your persona is too accepting of everything. He's clearly unfamiliar with htis strange place, its customs and the ...

Hi there. I didn't meet you before so... it's nice to meet you.

Caleb "Of course," I replied with a grin. "Piece of cake. What's my time limit?" "Umm. Shall we say two days?" Tiny hesitated. "Two days?" I repeated. "Well I suppose ...

$Hmmm. That's a good point. Some books have way too much action these days and I'm always relieved when I find a story that takes the time to explain things ...

Welcome to the site! I'm Heather and it's nice to meet you. Oh and you already met one of the most awesome people within this community. And no, I don't ...

Oooh. I love the idea of this and the title is brilliant. I'd love to know why they're burning the house down (or is it just a pile of wood) ...

Scipio stood with a grin and led the way to the kitchen. "Wow," Alice gasped as she stared around. The table was set for two and the food had already ...

Luke I led Amanta to another clearing and handed her a sword and shield. "First, we need to warm up. Remember those excersises I showed you yesterday?" I asked as ...

Kate "Aren't you going to get a dress?" Calder asked me. I turned my blue eyes on him and sighed. "No. I don't think I'll go," I replied. "Not go?" ...

I think that's a good direction to approach it from but perhaps take a brief look at the stereotypical male too so you can do a comparrison? Maybe have three ...

I love this! You have such a brilliant tune, the rhymes sound natural and the words are excellent. Seriously, these lyrics are brilliant and I wouldn't change a thing. Good ...

Hehe. I love this film. In fact, I was watching it the other day and Inigo is easily my favourite character. I'd never thought about him in terms of writing ...

Caleb I entered the guitar store and pretended to look at an old, broken guitar that hung on the wall in one corner. The store keeper's shadow fell across me ...

It would be better if each line was gramatically correct but it's amusing.