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They look brilliant, Mattster. Tempo is just how I imagined her (With the exception of the high heels rather than boots) and I love her expression and posture. Infra's horns ...

Amelia "Okay then we resume our journey," I agreed. "But what about Infra?" Colin asked. "Don't we have to find him first?" "Don't worry, it is inevetible that we will ...

I'm a little confused so I think I'll let you finish introducing the dimensions thing before I post...

Kate "Wait!" I stepped in front of Lindsay and pushed her wand arm down before approaching Adam. "Nooo. Get back! Get back, stay back!" The boy commanded, clutching his knees ...

Caleb I made my way down towards one of the kadikoy's bases. It was a small weapons shop, one of the 'not so well known' ones. I strode up to ...

Isabelle "How about Bridge?" One of the guests suggested. There were various opinions expressed on the matter and it was finally decided that we would start with Bridge and then ...

I might submit something but you're probably better advertising this in the contest section as I suggested in your blog. Also, where do we post submissions?

Hmmm. I think you need to fix the tense changes and the punctuation could be improved but you have a reasonable base here. First, decide if you want to write ...

I'm with claudette on this one. It feels much more like lyrics and as such it isn't bad but as a poem it needs an awful lot more punctuation, the ...

I liked this but the punctuation and wording need some work and there's always room to improve where imagery is concerned. Here's a quick line by line - My nameless ...

I think this is a really good photo. The contrast between the silhouettes and the fire works perfectly and the colours are simply beautiful.

I think they're all very cute. They could be a bit neater and such like you might want to make your lines softer and your colours a little bolder but, ...

Tylar "I am," I replied with a soft smile. "But it's been fun." "I haven't had such a bad time myself," Kurokawa admitted. I took her hand in mine and ...

Kate I was happily walking back towards hogwarts with the others, my right hand held gently by Jesse and my left clutching the flowers when it happened. I looked up ...

Eleanor Fawkes As usual I was one of the first to awake and I took my time washing my face and body with a damp flannel. In fact, this was ...