Rydia

Hello there and welcome to YWS. A spell check is always a useful tool if you're a member here or a writer in general but don't worry there are some ...

This is awesome, Nate! I love the reflection of the logo. It's so pretty.

Thanks Gadi! I'm working on a longer version at the moment actually so that I can bring more of the plot into it and don't have to hold back on ...

Kate "Expeliarmus!" I heard the word but neither recognised the voice or saw anyone's lips move so I figured it must be the person within Adam. This thought was confirmed ...

Arianna "Okay," The third member of the group turned to face us confidently. "We're going to need some chairs for the outline of the boat." This wasn't necessarily true but ...

Arianna Lucy came and sat upon Danny's desk which afforded her a glare from him and a small smile from most other members of the class. "Alright then, move the ...

Raven I hurriedly laid a hand upon Ilum's arm and guided my magic into his veins. "Stay on your toes, we're not out of here yet," he warned. I nodded ...

I like the plot you have here but I think some of the dialogue needs a little more work and you should have probably gone through and checked for mistakes. ...

Cool. I'd love to travel more.

Happy Birthday Imp! I hope you have a fantastic day.

Name= Annie. Age= 18. Hair= Long, curly and a gingery red. Eyes= A grey-blue. Complexion= Pale and quite a few freckles. Figure= Tall and quite an athletic build. Personality= She's ...

Here's the completed re-write with ending number three but there are other changes too... A Moonlit Stroll The moonlight trickled through the thick, grimy air and alighted upon the cobblestone ...

Why not take the monsters they have in dungeons and dragons? I could find you a list if you like... Raven "Look out!" I shouted, pushing Karana down as a ...

Oh wow, that is so amazing! Where can I get one of those staff things?

A friend of Alainna? Then you're very welcome indeed. I'm Heather and I'm here to inform you about the new buddy system we have here. If you're feeling a little ...