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Re: Cheese Slicer
This is a strange little poem to be honest. I think it has the potential to be a light, enjoyable, perhaps even amusing poem but at the moment it's more ...
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Re: Chat room adventures
"Okay so what do we do now?" Rick wondered. "Do you have any money?" Heather asked. Rick pulled an assortment of coins from his pocket much to Heather's surprise. "Earth ...
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Re: Amelia's Photos
1. The trees are really interesting and I love the shadows they throw but it's rather out of focus and you should crop the right a touch to take those ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"Any idea at all where we are?" Alice asked Scipio. He cast another glance around the street. "Well, there's a cobbled road, people in funny costumes and..." He hesitated as ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Please Welcome Sam and Adam To Big Brother
Well done you two! And congratulations.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: High School with THEM
Welcome to the storybook Palantalid! Arianna I watched as Lucy came and threw herself upon the grassy hill before turning back to the sky and resuming my flight. Some time ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: YWS: The Gathering
Amelia My ears pricked up at the question and I turned to Grif to see how he woud answer. For a moment, it was as if he hadn't heard the ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"I can't just tell you who you are!" Scipio exclaimed. "And why not?" Alice asked, her voice trembling with the effort of holding back all her fear and confusion. "Well ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Piracy Upon the Sea
Amelia "It aint worth nothing," I replied with a thoughtful nod. "Aye. Not worth nothing," Skippy sighed. "I'll take it then," I decided. With a shrug, he handed me the ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: feeding my ego
It's nice to meet you Winters and welcome to YWS! It's nice to have another video game addict here. Any in particular that you like to play?
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis
2:20 pm Katalyn "Are we heading in any direction in particular or just trying to get lost?" Kat snapped as they rounded another corner and had to step around yet ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis Discussion Thread
Thanks!
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: High School with THEM
Arianna I had a free period after drama so I hurried outside and, when no one was looking, changed into a raven and flew back towards the school. I fluttered ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Necklace
Oooh, I love necklaces like that! I prefer the ones that are a touch more celtic in style but it's really pretty (I'm talking about the one with the black ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Violinist
In general, this is very good but the left arm is a little thin and long and the fingers need some work. Also, I think the violin isn't placed quite ...
Sep 23, 2007
