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6666 - 6624 = 42!!! Lol. But yes, that is very awesome Snoink. Congrats.

In general, this was a touch cliche with the setting of the bar, the dark, mysterious man whos drink gets spilt and the horrid, scary vampires disturbing the peace but ...

She's referring to this - The mother shook her head. She told her kitten something, and it backed away. - and I was a touch confused at first but then ...

Caleb The club was crowded and by that I mean that I couldn't even seem to get inside but then... where's the fun in a challenge without the challenge aspect? ...

Arianna I fluttered away again and then turned once more to look at her. "Someone you know," I answered. "Someone? A person then?" Lucy asked. I ruffled my feathers and ...

Oh yes and just an extra little note - I think sokool is right. I love how you've done most of your description but that little aside near the beginning ...

Arianna Trapped. So she did know I wasn't just a bird? And if she didn't, I certainly couldn't let her find out. I fought fiercely against the strange power that ...

An interesting story, my friend. You have some great action here, some lovely descriptions and generally a well paced, well written, enjoyable piece of writing. Perhaps just a touch too ...

Of course we know but it's a huge secret that you are not permitted access to. Hehe. Only kidding. First, here's some general info on Pat - - which you ...

These are some nice tips and you're right, research isn't always fun but it's essential. Thanks for writing these, Chocoholic.

Hmmm. Well I love 'Of Mice and Men' and I've not read this one but it sounds interesting so perhaps I'll invest in a copy.

I've not read the book but I'm sure that you can find some information on it either at your local library or on the internet...

Well why not post what you have so far in the literary forum and add a link to it here? Then people can see what you've covered and give you ...

Annie and Luke hurried towards the sounds of the screams and found themselves in a particularly dark cavern. Taking a few pieces of a flint like rock from his pocket, ...

I think that this was very well written. Your characters are brilliant and some of your dialogue is beautiful. You have a good variety of setences, some lovely description and ...