Rydia

Inactivity for two weeks does not mean that it's dead, trust me. Why not have your character come meet mine, Jasmine? He's currently at the castle disguised as a knight ...

I'm a member of the group and I think it's a good idea to spread awareness of this. There are many young people on you tube and it's too easy ...

Hmm. I like this, you have some good action and the plot is still advancing well but you need more detailed description and you need to be careful to read ...

Oh wow, you look so beautiful in that dress, Suzie! I love the beads and your glasses are so awesome! Your friend John looks like a fun sort of guy ...

Yeah, I did think the 'me' might be a bit of phonetics to show her accent but, one word isn't enough for an accent. It's better to change more of ...

This is very pretty but perhaps you should have added a few more bits of the picture, just really tiny places scattered across the middle to give an even stronger ...

That idea sounds fine to me, Hunter.

That would be fun and then my character could be conflicted as to which side she should be on, having fought for Maverhov until recently.

The black and white theme is very effective, the angle of the book is great and the feather quill really adds to that archaic, traditional feel. Also, I love that ...

Wow, this is brilliant. I love how detailed it is and that cannon is awesome. Some of the lines are a bit sketchy and rough but that just adds to ...

First off, this needs a rating so either you or a helpful mod needs to add one. Lol. If only I had a cookie for every time I've said that... ...

Lol. That was just how long he was my favourite author Kingdom, not what ages his books interest. I still read them now, I just have other favourites. And I ...

Banned for not reading the whole banned thread - Chocoholic has already been banned for being addicted to chocolate.

*Re-read above post and see discussion thread*

Wow, this has all got into a bit of a mess. I think we need to all remember to read everyone else's posts, yes? Hehe. Only, Kev is now having ...