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Eleanor Fawkes I darted away, around the corner and hurried down the stairs. "Imposters, imposters!" I shouted at the top of my breath. Unfortunately, the corridoors appeared to be deserted ...

Kate "Yes," I replied. Jesse led me onto the dance floor and placed a hand on my waist, our bodies pressed so close together that our breaths mingled to form ...

Raven An hour passed and I began to worry. I mean sure, an hour at a tavern was nothing but there was something about this place that was worrying me. ...

Ah but my character can't use hers anyway.

Awesome! This will certainly get the site more publicity =)

Hello again! The usual general feeling that some more description would be nice but you have a good plot and it just needs tidying up a little. Here's my suggestions ...

Day 1. 3:18pm Katalyn "And you expect me to stay here?" He shook his ginger head back and forth. It reminded me of a lion's mane how it fell back ...

Congratulations Alleycat! You have some beautiful imagery =)

Hey there! I like this. I think you have some interesting characters and some good dialogue but you need to add more description and some of your grammar is a ...

Hey there and welcome to the site! It's lovely to meet you, lost in the spill canvas. Hmm. I'm afraid that I'm going to have to give you a nickname. ...

Dislike - Hmmm. This one's hard. Oooh, I know! You need to be more confident. You're a great writer, a brilliant friend and an excellent critiquer and you should be ...

Hey there! Just thought I'd let you know that we like members to critique two pieces of work for each one that they post so write a few revies before ...

Dislike - That I haven't had a chance to talk to you in chat for ages! Love - You're a great writer and all your posts in Camelot are brilliant ...

Arianna "You want to head to the cinema?" Lucy asked suddenly. "I mean, we could watch a film or something?" "Sounds good," I replied. She nodded and we crossed to ...

That's so pretty! I want to live in the Ferral Nebula!