Rydia

Whenever it sounds right but then, that's different for every writer is it not? I don't like to have really long lines so I always break before it's further than ...

Awesome! You know, there's going to be a huge increase of activity now as everyone tries to get to be first on the list....

I didn't know that rated work went to the front page. Thanks for the tip, Snoink!

I think it's worth a try. Is it a weakly payment system? If it is then you could go for a week or two and see what you think.

I think adding the grammar would be an excellent idea Reyu but for now, I'll try to just look at the wording of the poem. I don't like the first ...

I really like this but I think you need to tidy up your grammar and add a few more stanzas. Here's some changes I'd make - Miss was at the ...

Okay, now for some general suggestions for your plot. A lot of this seems unoriginal but then, it's hard to be original these days so try to put an original ...

Hey there Sarah, welcome to the site! I'm Heather and it's lovely to meet you and don't worry, it's nice when authors introduce themselves in the welcome thread. That way, ...

Hey there Newsha, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! How would you pronounce your name? 'Noo-sha?' or is that completely wrong? Also, what genre do you ...

Hehe. I'd not heard that before actually but I love it!

Raven "You found him then?" Karana asked smugly as I exited the tavern with Warren in tow. "Yeah and good thing I did, he's rather drunk," I replied, wrinkling my ...

Hi again. In general, this wasn't a bad introduction but you're right, you need more character development. I suggest you work on the boss a bit first. Descriptions of her ...

Dislike - That you get to live in Australia where it's warm and I'm stuck in rainy England! And that we're not on each other's friends lists but I suppose ...

*Moved to Other Fiction* Some good changes for the grammar but you still have a few awkward sentences so maybe take another look at the suggestions made on your first ...

I like the coloured versions a lot but I think they're less detailed than the first. The bottom one is full of emotion though and I love how bold all ...