Rydia

7/10 - It's relevant for writers and it made me smile =)

Raven "Now do you believe me?" Warren asked happily as the last of the husks was destroyed. "I'm sorry, Warren, but you did sound rather drunk," I smiled across at ...

Eleanor Fawkes Two letters? This was getting more and more confusing so I decided to merely observe and kept a particularly close eye on the two letters. The first of ...

Arianna The show finished and Lucy and I headed out of the cinema both laughing and smiling as we discussed our favorite parts. "And wasn't Peter gorgeous!" I exclaimed as ...

Name: Kitty15. Nickname: Kitty or Heather. Rank: Light Carrier. Organization: Wouldn't you like to know ;) Lol. SPEW. Ship/Plane: Not quite built yet. Bio: Heather is a little low on ...

Lightening, not fire, dear...

I think your grammar needs fixing and I'm not sure that a teacher would act like that so maybe have it between two school friends instead? Here's how the grammar ...

Hi there, I don't think I had the pleasure of meeting you last time. I'm Kitty. What genres do you like to read and write?

I'd stand in the downpour, Until twilight if you asked. Heavy drops of inky-coloured rain, Soaking me to the skin; [I think you could have described the rain better. Remember ...

In general, I think you used rhyme effectively and I enjoyed it. Here's a few suggestions - I don't write to impress, Just to merely express [I think this line ...

Raven "Did you hear that?" Ilum faltered, causing Warren and myself to stumble as his head swivelled back and forth. "There it is again," Karana hissed and sure enough there ...

Congratulations Lizzy!

8/10 It's a bit plain but it's a very pretty name.

I love the title for this piece, Max, but I think you need to expand on some of your images. At the moment it seems a little fragmented and the ...

I agree, there's nothing wrong with dark poetry but emo poetry is much too over dramatic. Any poetry that is effective as a piece of literature does not count as ...