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Amelia Fortunately a brief inspection showed that the Jetter wasn't damaged beyond a few scratches and according to Adelaide, the same was true of Grif. "You're not going to cause ...

Katalyn I spared a mere moment watching after Jo and then returned my attention to Adara. Taking her right arm in my hands, I began to rub vigorously, attempting to ...

After checking all the fighters, Kitty headed towards the Navigation room. "Hey, Alice, hi Bella, how much further do we need to go?" Kitty called out, moving some maps so ...

Hello again! I enjoyed this chapter, nice and calm after all the action of the last and a good chance to get to like the characters better and to find ...

Jacqueline "Why do you think she stopped to talk to us?" I wondered as Jill and I hurried towards the door, both a little shaken by our recent encounter. "I've ...

Luke "That she does," I sighed. 'And so did her brother' I added silently, my heart clenching so that I had to remind myself to breathe. "That's decided then. A ...

Hey Jess! I'm not usually fond on Cinquains because they're so short but you've managed to write a really nice description of frost in so few words. Here's a few ...

Amelia We set out again towards the village, taking it in turns to carry the still unconscious Quinn and keeping an eye out for Infra. "You mind if I have ...

Luke "Sounds like you sea assassins are a hard people but it's very clear none of those reasons are right," Amanta stated, coming to stand beside me. "Well I'm not ...

Jacqueline Michael finally finished his proclamation and moved onto the more precise, detailed information. He read out a list of statistics including how many new victims the shards had claimed ...

Thanks Jasmine. Looks like it's time to do a re-write for this one =)

Raven I nodded. The suggestion seemed sensible enough and Luke led us to a room that was full of sleeping bags, covers and mattresses. "Guests don't stay here often so ...

Oh wow, that's such a cute little kitty! I love his/her eyes, they're gorgeous and I want to cuddle him/her so bad!

Julia "Hang on tight!" Ryouku commanded as he launched into the air after Luna, rocketing higher and higher towards the expanding speck of light. The initial shock of his take ...

Hello there, it's lovely to meet you! Out of pure curiosity, may I ask what genre your novel is? And what type of books do you enjoy reading? If you ...