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Hey Kimberleigh! I would shorten your name except that I love it too much! Welcome to the site, dear and if you'd like a critique or have a few questions, ...

It's lovely to meet you Pixie, welcome to the site! I'm always happy to critique work so if you do decide to write and post anything, be sure to pm ...

Hi there, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! If you'd like a critique, have any questions about the site (or life in general) or would like ...

Hehe. I never use funnest either. But usually it would be 'came up with the games that were the most fun to play'? Hehe. But then, I'm just picky... Jacqueline ...

No need for an introduction this time, here's some more observations - The chill nibbled at her skin and left it feeling raw. The second was that she was lying ...

An interesting little rhyme. It's lovely to meet you weirdo and welcome to the site. What sort of writing are you interested in?

Hey there Suzie! I really like this, extremely chilling and fantastic imagery! Just a few small points before I move on to general comments - Not the kind of icy ...

Hmmm. This does sound like it will be an interesting novel but I agree that the introduction is unnecessary. Yes, it intrigues me and makes me want to read more ...

I have to agree, that you compress a lot of historical information into a rather short first chapter. The details of the rebellion may well be very important, in which ...

There you go, I left some flowers and a note...

Hmmm. I think you have an interesting idea for a song here though this should maybe be moved to fan-fiction? I'm not sure. I'd have to get a second opinion ...

Hello there Candyfloss, mind if I call you Candy? I'm really fond of that name. It's great to meet you and allow me to welcome you to YWS. Which country ...

Hello there Cheez, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! If you'd like a critique on some of your writing, have some questions about the site (or ...

Okay so I wasn't sure where to post this but I just realised that I can no longer access the instructor's user-group and I'm wondering if that's because of my ...

I love the hair and the outfit is very well drawn so long as you ignore the missing boots but I think the shadow for the nose is a little ...