Rydia

1. It's very beautiful. I love all the blue tones and the mountains in the distance and the crater/lake in the foreground are fantastic. Very eye catching. 2. This is ...

Day 1. 4:28 pm. Katalyn. I put the three thermos flasks in my bag and then headed towards the main entrance but I paused when I heard voices growing closer. ...

Well, Kat has only been in Ashville for two weeks but some of the other characters could have seen her singing in the clubs and such.

Not yet but I think we'll probably have to. I'll pm Nate. See if he can put us back temporarily at least and I'll try to get in touch with ...

Raven I slept surprisingly well and woke in the morning to find that I was the first up. Glancing around the room, I smiled to myself. Warren was sprawled in ...

Luke "It would have to be very subtle and at the same time loud enough or bold enough to be seen by all of us," I mused. "Forget I ever ...

Jacqueline "Oh yes, we can try on so many pretty dresses!" Jillian trilled and at the same time I whispered to Christy - "Forces are expanding though not quite as ...

Hey there, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! If you want a critique on any of your work then feel free to pm me! Why not ...

Katalyn "I'll go to the entrance," Mev decided, hurrying away before Dave could protest. "Well?" Keri asked sternly. He grimaced and then set off in the opposite direction. "Think she's ...

Amelia Grif nodded thoughtfully. "That's possible," he agreed. "Anyone else?" "Well... there's the book," I admitted. "A book? 'ow can a book be valuable?" Quinn scoffed. "It's not just 'a ...

Then the pimp’s knee-cap shatters, and the copper feels everything is happening in slow motion even though he knows exactly what he’s doing. There’s a thud as the pimp falls ...

Okay, that took longer than I expected but here we go, codes converted and sorry for the delay. He fixed his tie, finished his drink, and then proceeded [s]to[/s] with ...

Hey there Cat! First, I have a few suggestions for your format - post your poem in the normal font style and size of text used on YWS. It certainly ...

Hello there Cat. You're much too easy to discourage, my dear. Don't worry. You're bound to get a few critiques you don't agree with, even the best of the writers ...

Luke "I think we should give it a try," I decided, "and then we're going to need a distraction if that fails." "I still don't think this is a good ...