Rydia

The enemy camp, yes. And we're trying to free Dahlia who is being held in a cell within a cave towards the centre of the camp. The plan is for ...

Ooooh, in love with the librarian, what an interesting concept. I think you could improve on some of your imagery - describe the woman more - and punctuate better perhaps ...

Thanks and yes, you can't have war without peace or peace without war but peace is never really achieved so it's more that the concept of peace is false than ...

In the words of our great administrator - fixed! Hehe. Three cheers for Nate!

Katalyn I followed Elaina towards the medicine section where she began grabbing various items. First it was just migraine medicine but then she started filling her pockets with other bits ...

Yeah, eating is certainly a must. I was thinking about it earlier and Kat hasn't eaten since the night before so she must be really hungry. Tired too.

Hey there! Don't be an emo, just be yourself! Trust me, it's much more fun and welcome to the site, it's lovely to meet you. If you have any questions, ...

"Adam!" Kitty hurried towards the captain. "Do you want me to take a fighter out?" "Yeah, take Alice and Bella too. Try to target the front of the ship and ...

Hello there, my friend! This is very good and you've made some lovely improvements. Your characters seem more believable now and you've got some very good descriptions of people but ...

Jaqueline "No way," I replied, shaking my head. "It's much too..." "Feminine?" Jillian finished with a roll of her eyes. "Go on. Try it," Christy urged, picking it back up ...

Luke Half an hour passed and there was no sign of Aren so I shouldered my bow and edged around the camp. After a few steps I realised that Amanta ...

"Come on, we have to get outside," Heather informed Rick, pulling him away from the shelter. "What are you doing? It's not safe out there!" One very unhelpful citizen informed ...

Katalyn I hurried after the girl who was running down the aisles as if Kevin's very life relied upon the knee brace and perhaps it did. In fact, there was ...

Raven "I'll meet you outside," Luke decided, already hurrying from the room but as he went he cast one last glance back. His eyes spoke a question as they passed ...

Arianna "So what do you think we're doing here?" I asked Lucy. "Say that again," She prompted, kneeling down to pet my head. I repeated my question and she gave ...